Ackbar! Eliminated some chaff, redirected a lot of examples and builds to the ship sections!
Raddus! Same chaff elimination, and eliminated a lot of "potentially decent" ships with him.
Dodonna! I added a bit about using him versus choosing Agate instead, and some rearrangements and reorganization of the article.
Rieekan! I eliminated most of the fleet building section and referred you to Eric's fleet archetypes section.
Leia! I eliminated a lot of my meandering and summarized the "common ships" a lot faster. I kept the "call-and-response" voice in there for organization and it's where I started using it.
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